Wednesday, January 28, 2009

我第一次去动物园，感到很奋。我一进去动物园，看到很多动物。我闻到了花香味。我也听到了动物们的脚步声。
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5 comments:

  1. 凯文February 3, 2009 at 11:40 PM

    俊良，你写太短了！下次一定要写多一点！

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  2. 陈清杨February 4, 2009 at 3:33 AM

    写得太少了！下次再加油

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  3. 何义靖February 4, 2009 at 10:16 PM

    你好。你少了一个字。你只写了奋，没写兴。

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  4. 吴莉雯February 4, 2009 at 10:21 PM

    你忘记写兴奋的兴在一个句子里面。

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  5. Caleb TanFebruary 4, 2009 at 10:23 PM

    你好。你没有写兴奋的兴。你以后不要那么粗心了。

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